Will cox (feedback needed)

I made two videos earlier today in my first pen back, one was a front view and the other a side view. Please let me know what you think.

Heres the side:


Here’s front view:


you have a good stride , keep it up,

when you finish, jus put down your back legs and stand still face the catchers please, dont hang it up high and off the balance,

arm swing:you should left up the ball first instead of your elbow,
so the elbow may not higher than your shoulder

seoncd, i hope your upper body don’t bow like Carlos Mamol

side release point, can still achieve with your body straight, like Randy Johnson, etc (but i did not say that you swing your arm like Randy johnson to achieve side arm release point)

release point is release point , it has nothing to do with arm swing action