College freshman needing expert feedback

I made two videos earlier today in my first pen back, one was a front view and the other a side view.
Please let me know what you think.

Heres the side:

http://www.facebook.com/l.php?u=http%3A%2F%2Fwww.youtube.com%2Fwatch%3Fv%3D-AxlHk2DPVM%26feature%3Dmfu_in_order%26list%3DUL&h=3a200

Here’s front view:

http://www.facebook.com/l.php?u=http%3A%2F%2Fwww.youtube.com%2Fwatch%3Fv%3DvaxO7Ln6p40&h=3a200

[quote=“cagunheat15”]I made two videos earlier today in my first pen back, one was a front view and the other a side view.
Please let me know what you think.

Heres the side:

http://www.facebook.com/l.php?u=http%3A%2F%2Fwww.youtube.com%2Fwatch%3Fv%3D-AxlHk2DPVM%26feature%3Dmfu_in_order%26list%3DUL&h=3a200

Here’s front view:

Sorry bro, I aint got a Facebook, just dont make drastic changes in your mechanics unless your comfortable.
http://www.facebook.com/l.php?u=http%3A%2F%2Fwww.youtube.com%2Fwatch%3Fv%3DvaxO7Ln6p40&h=3a200[/quote]