13 year old son

This is just a video I put together for my 13 yr old son’s grandpa.
Not sure if it’s clear enough for anyone to comment on or to give any pointers. The video does zoom in more at counter 5:35.
The video can be watched full-screen by clicking the expand icon in the bottom right corner.

I can try to get more shot from a different and tighter angle.
What would be the best way to shoot video to make it easiest for someone to evaluate? I.e. From what angle?



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